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Oeming
10-04-2006, 12:59 PM
Which one do you like better? Granted with the chaos, color will help...
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j271/Oeming/POW23pg02.jpg


Or B....

http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j271/Oeming/POW23pg02B.jpg



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jza1218
10-04-2006, 01:03 PM
I am freakin blind because I don't see a difference
Oeming
10-04-2006, 01:38 PM
hah, panel 3:)
jza1218
10-04-2006, 01:41 PM
Gotcha...the leg...

I like the first one better
MoneyMelon
10-04-2006, 02:19 PM
I think the first one is better.
NewRisingSun
10-04-2006, 09:37 PM
Yeah, I think the first one works better.

It puts the reader in the moment more imo.

More visceral I guess
toede
10-05-2006, 08:27 PM
go with your gut instinct not what some fanboys say.

but since you are asking.. #1. more impact.
avengingtitan
10-06-2006, 07:57 AM
First one all the way.
Sam Ridyard
10-06-2006, 09:44 AM
I like the second one...
Just to be different.

But I really do, I just don't see how a car could flip upside down that quickly in the first picture.

They're both really good, but 2 is better.
EmeraldGuy32
10-07-2006, 05:33 AM
Gotcha...the leg...

I like the first one better
The car is also flipping another direction. I like the first one better, but not by much cuz the second one is damn cool too.
JL_Amato
10-07-2006, 09:52 PM
Number One.
khuxford
10-11-2006, 04:46 PM
I like the second one...
Just to be different.

But I really do, I just don't see how a car could flip upside down that quickly in the first picture.

They're both really good, but 2 is better.

I agree...the second one...
Shoeface
10-24-2006, 04:52 PM
I like the second one more, just seems more asthetically pleasing. I mean, sure the picture is meant to show chaos and all, but I prefer the second one as it does look a bit cleaner. That is just personal preference, go wit what you think works best.

Or flip for it.
estee
10-24-2006, 05:01 PM
"A" makes more sense structurally.

In panel three of "B" I wondered how the car made a sudden right turn while flying through the air.
Arion
10-25-2006, 11:48 PM
Oeming: You live in New Jersey? I had no idea. Sorry, this doesn’t have anything to do with the question. I would pick number 1.
Oeming
10-26-2006, 02:02 PM
Oeming: You live in New Jersey? I had no idea. Sorry, this doesn’t have anything to do with the question. I would pick number 1.

Yes, but Im soon joining the exodus out of Jersey. Been here most of my life but its time to get out. Its stupid expensive.
lorbaat2
10-26-2006, 07:21 PM
I gotta say the second one, because I like seeing more of the car.
HartyPotter
11-24-2006, 03:38 PM
i like how the car comes in in the second one.
nickmaynard
11-27-2006, 02:33 PM
the second one is better. in the first, the leg is so big and in the center that for me it becomes the central focus of the picture. like, 'look at this leg, that happens to be surrounded by this other stuff'. the second page is better. both are incredible. i think very highly of you.
Forbush Man
12-16-2006, 06:22 PM
the 2nd one.
trachmanred
05-28-2007, 10:28 PM
1st one but, redo the last panel. Needs more terror.
dorknerdgeek
05-28-2007, 10:33 PM
I'm a big fan of #2. I hereby call no one a jerk for any reason.
EmeraldGuy32
05-29-2007, 05:55 AM
Something tells me he's sent this to Bendis by now. :D;)
Woody
06-07-2007, 11:24 PM
]http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a29/Woodyfloyd/CapAmervNamor.jpg
oops, wrong thread